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Open Poetry #48
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2012-06-13 12:03 PM

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Red and orange
Leaves are lying
On the road

It rained
All last night
The street is wet
And shimmering
In the morning sun

Water drips
From telephone wires
Wooden eaves  Here
And there a bird sings

The whole world
Along with me is waiting
For you to come outside

Out the back door
Of a non-descript
Two story corner house
With a one car garage


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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-06-13 02:29 PM

How romantic...if Jill read your poetry she would surely come out...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2012-06-21 12:11 PM

Very nice...James
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
3 posted 2012-06-23 06:48 PM

Very sweet, John!
Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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Oregon
4 posted 2012-06-23 08:23 PM

I like that you wait for the sun in this way, knowing she will brighten your day.
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