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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Spring Ends Azure skies – spring day Floating clouds – day dream Caress wind – send thoughts Sunlight warms – eyes close Vision forms – hope grows Forest path – stroll shared Twilight comes – hands held Evening falls – stars shine Moonlit dance – love shared Solstice starts – spring ends Karen Mc Neil June 20, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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niteismyday Junior Member
since 2012-06-19
Posts 35 |
WOW! What a beautiful arrangement of words, this really put a wonderful image into my mind. Thanks for sharing this. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Very pretty, Star! Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
To combine love and lovers within the confines of the changing season is cool. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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chourouk Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52 |
Nice reading |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
niteismyday I am so glad you got an image...I try to give my vision each time I write...thank you...*BIG HUGS* Ms E. I am glad you liked it...*BIG HUGS* Jerry Thanks...it was a fun write...*BIG HUGS* chourouk Thanks for the pass...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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