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chourouk
Member

since 2012-05-29

Posts 52

0 posted 2012-06-10 04:08 PM

Because i love you
i will leave the speechto the pens.

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Because i love you
i will kill the sad which inside me
and make love my address.

***********

Because i love you
i will not erase my memories
because the word of love will
always be in my deep.

***********

Because i love you
i will offer you my heart
and i will do evreything i can
in order to be number one in
this world among humans.

***********

by Chourouk

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-06-10 04:41 PM

Yes, dear Chourouk, we do all of this because we love. Your pen renders this sublimation of your emotions very beautifully.

Hugs.
Margherita

chourouk
Member

since 2012-05-29

Posts 52

2 posted 2012-06-11 05:34 AM

Margherita

Your presence encourages me more about writing.
thank you for your humble pass

My respect
Chourouk

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-06-11 09:28 PM

Nice...James

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2012-06-12 08:27 AM

Because i love you
i will offer you my heart
and i will do evreything i can

And that is all anyone can do.

I like this very much - Welcome to Passions!!

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2012-06-12 11:39 AM

"because I love you...simple truth...wonderful said...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

chourouk
Member

since 2012-05-29

Posts 52

6 posted 2012-06-12 03:37 PM

james

Your presence is the secret of beauty to my page.

Thank you

chourouk
Member

since 2012-05-29

Posts 52

7 posted 2012-06-12 03:58 PM

suthern

All flowers of the world i offer it to you
and not enough.
Thank you for your pass.

Chourouk

chourouk
Member

since 2012-05-29

Posts 52

8 posted 2012-06-12 04:32 PM

Startime

Thanks for my poem that brought you here
your presence like sunrise

My respect
Chourouk

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-06-13 03:56 PM

Because you love, you have a mighty and valid pen, Chourouk. Good for you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

chourouk
Member

since 2012-05-29

Posts 52

10 posted 2012-06-13 04:13 PM

I derive the strength and the courage
from your wonderful presence.

Thank you so much

My respect
Chourouk

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

11 posted 2012-06-17 01:55 PM

I love how you portray the strength of love. I really liked this part:

Because i love you
i will offer you my heart
and i will do evreything i can
in order to be number one in
this world among humans.

Love is a feeling and I felt it when I read your poem.

Alison

chourouk
Member

since 2012-05-29

Posts 52

12 posted 2012-06-21 03:21 PM

I miss you Alison. I'm very happy to see you again thank you so much for your wonderful pass.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

13 posted 2012-06-21 03:49 PM

What a very nice thing to say. Thank you.

Alison

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