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Open Poetry #48

is it what it seams

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-01-31 06:04 AM

occasionally I remember when you were there
polishing your jewelry quietly for moments
and then you would shout out loud in your mind

why that black rabbit of alice's was done
after only one sheet of music was splendered
instead of holding you captive in her wonderland

making you do concerts with those pails of notes
that slipped through your fingering of frets
and fretted knots like those amber waters falling

and caused you to hide under your bed with fear
that you said she was lovely with her machinery
that you wished you could borrow just long enough

to make our whetted dreams into caramel reality

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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-31-2012 10:39 AM).]

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2012-01-31 06:41 PM

Is it what it seams...indeed...siiiigh

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2012-02-01 06:11 AM

ms BBBel1e, thanks little one

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2012-02-01 06:42 AM

Ohhhh my my, what have we here... grin

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2012-02-01 07:06 AM

Thanks ms Nicole

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2012-02-05 01:52 PM

Sometimes I just pause and think and visualize. There are so many images in this poem. Love the black rabbit, pail of notes and fretting frets. I came out from under my bed just long enough to read this, Dark one.

ali-san

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