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Open Poetry #48

Such Moments as This (#2)

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-06-18 11:20 AM

     Such Moments as This (#2)

Beneath an inscrutable moon and
black-velvet star field tapestry,
pure and wondrous forms
shadow-dance in the uncertain
moonlit splendor just before dawn,
like diaphanous spirits floating
  in and out of our dreams.
What price could be placed
on this mystic-Spring forest and
such moments as this, stolen
  from Time,
or our finest thoughts and memories
  of Love
that silently walk with us here.

                  --- b. e. adams (6/18/2012)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-06-18 11:46 AM

WoW! I can see the ghostly dancing under the bold moonlit panorama in the forest green in my thoughts as we speak. Exceptional writing.

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-06-18 01:14 PM

You weave moments that draw this reader into a vision of timeless love...the vision is wonderful...**BIG HUGS**

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2012-06-18 03:10 PM

When thinking love, Bruce, you write exceptional poetry. Mind you, all of your poems are. Enjoyed!

Helen

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2012-06-19 03:21 AM

Your poetry is unsurpassed in it's beauty and pure emotion, Bruce.
Ida

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