Open Poetry #48 |
Kindred Spirits |
Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Kindred Spirits Walking a forest path where few feet have traveled Sunlight dapples here and there through tall pines The sounds of waking nature fill the ears with peace Birds sing while baby birds cry to be fed A rabbit hops across your path into foliage Not stopping to see the smile light your face Suddenly the path opens revealing a lake Pristine its beauty on this spring morning Beneath morning mist sounds of feeding fish echoes Waking sounds vibrate off ancient mountains Eagles soar aloft on air currents with wings spread Squirrels chatter leaping from tree to tree There he sits all alone among natures silence She stands surveying the one her heart calls He blends perfectly with the world surrounding him In his arms they’re joined as kindred spirits Karen Mc Neil June 17, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Beautifully done, Karen,as always. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Startime - Even in the midst of such vibrant spendor, there is Love. Kinda gives me the warm fuzzies, it does. Loved it. Namyh |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Jerry Thsnk you, Jerry, your comments are always welcome...*BIG HUGS* Namyh Warm fuzzies, eh...I'll take it...I am in the mood for warm fuzzies tonight...I am glad you love it and appreciate your comments...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Startime, this is absolutely beautiful! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed walking the path to find love, Star. Smiles, ms. e |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Rose Thank you so very much for such a compliment coming from you...*BIG HUGS* Ms E. Hope springs eternal...natures path is so beautiful...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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