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Open Poetry #48
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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
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New Jersey
0 posted 2012-06-13 11:21 PM


A gentle touch from Josh’s hand,
and warmth inside starts to expand.
It warms my fingers, warms my toes,
the warmth inside seeps through my bones.

Inside this warmth, I find my home.

*Amber
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Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2012-06-14 12:06 PM

It gave me a warm feeling to read this poem...this is the perfect ending for it..."Inside this warmth, I find my home"...great writing...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-06-14 06:23 AM

I don't believe you could have expressed yourself any better. Very nice wording.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
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3 posted 2012-06-14 04:57 PM

Beautifully expressed.

Michael
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