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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada 
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Dream Versus Reality I dream of sharing moonlit walks along a mountain forest path Reality is the absence of someone to share such a dream I dream of gazing at the stars and wishing on the first I see Reality is wishing stars are a child’s tale to make them smile I dream of dancing in moonlight to songs of natures serenade Reality is few can hear above the noise of modern life I dream of a sunlit romance as spring turns to summers’ promise Reality is that people forget true loves’ simplicity I dream an understanding man to share all my magical dreams Reality is do I search in vain in a harsh pain-filled world I dream, I dream in sweet slumber weaving visions that fill my soul Reality is I Believe Dreams Win versus Reality Karen Mc Neil June 13, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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chourouk Member
since 2012-05-29
Posts 52 |
I dream to be creative like you. your poems force me to read always for you because your words are not just words i could not find the right words to thank you about this wonderful poem i was here enjoy with your letter. Accept my pass Chourouk |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh, yes, dreams might win versus reality, but it is difficult to snuggle up to dreams . . . On second thought it isn't all that difficult after all, it's all according to who or what you might be dreaming. Dreams do come true I have been told. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
chourouk...thank you so much for your wonderful compliment...don't short change yourselve...you have beautiful words you share with us too...thanks for the pass...*HUGS* Jerry...ahhh yes, one never knows when dreams become reality...*grin* maybe I should wish on a star but right now it is kind of cloudy...you know, of course, I am hoping for a storm...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
I believe that what seems very real to us right now was once a fantasy and that a fantasy is in a since “real”. Reality is thus a product of fantasy and that a fantasy can, given enough time and cultivation, will come real, just as living plants will, given time and cultivation, bear fruit. It is said that the inability to distinguish fantasy from reality is a mental illness. This may be so, but to me nothing can be real until it is first fantasized. Why, I had to fantasize about coming to Colorado long before I finally got the opportunity to move to Colorado and without this preexisting fantasy nothing could have happened. Thow he never speaks of it, this goose sometimes has a “Karen” fantasy. She is indoginous and an inner figure (the inner feminine) who brings me love,laughter and consolation in a sometimes too harsh and painful world full of emptiness, that the arms and bed of this goose need not be empty. And so, since this goose is crazy and can’t tell the differentce between “fantasy” and “reality,” he sends wonderous and passionate hugs to the star of Karen. (But don’t tell anybody:----------) Jaime |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Excellent Romanticism and philosophy ... fine 'write' ! |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Jaime LOL...you are just too cute...a great lift to my ego...*BIG HUGS* Bruce I am glad you like the comparison...I am a true dreamer when it comes to nature and love...hope lives eternal...Thank you...**BIG HUGS** *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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