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Open Poetry #48

The Blind Path

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

0 posted 2012-06-13 08:56 PM

Traveling blindly down the path of life,
We find ourselves stumbling over stones and boulders of strife,
It's the light and the truth we fear,
So we remain in darkness shedding tear after tear.
If the blindfold is taken away,
We'll see the path clear as day.
We can go around the rocks,
Avoid the road blocks.
But we stumble on into the black,
Never knowing the light we lack.

~Arana Darkwolf~
An' it harm none, do what ye will. Blessed be.

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

1 posted 2012-06-13 09:25 PM

So true and Jesus is the light.

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-06-13 09:26 PM

And we grow with each stumble we take becoming the person we are based on the choices we made...I love the way you have written this poem...it makes one think...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-06-13 09:31 PM

I love the last two lines. Life is forever and constantly unpredictable. And the light we need to shine, sadly, the batteries go out just when we need them the most.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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