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Open Poetry #48

Dance with Your Dreams

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-06-13 08:29 AM

        Dance with Your Dreams

Come dance with me, your dreams,
   and the silver-shadows
in the perfect moonlight
along this meadow, forest edge
to the soft, sweet song of wilderness
among these endless hills of Spring
   passing,
forever free and traceless,
to the green and golden promise
of a Summer and a precious love.

               --- b. e. adams (6/13/2012)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-06-13 09:07 AM

Wonderful wordplay throughout this finely-tuned poem, Bruce.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2012-06-13 09:23 AM

Your poetry always takes one to such a beautiful place, Bruce.
Ida

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-06-13 09:44 AM

*sigh* your poetry always makes me want to dream of such a place and such a time...this is the kind of reality I dream of...thank you for its beauty...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2012-06-13 07:10 PM

"forever free and traceless"

like the feeling of ^

M

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

5 posted 2012-06-13 09:26 PM

nice!

I am hoping for a Summer love.

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