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rishikajain
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since 2012-06-04

Posts 1
Gujarat,india

0 posted 2012-06-04 05:54 AM

Love poetry

Mind and heart are totally in conflict

I am loving you like a nerd addict

Right or Wrong I don’t know

Either “we” stay or else “I” go

You don’t understand a word unspoken

I was insensible to give you my heart entry token

Right or Wrong I don’t know

Either “we” stay or else “I” go

Your priorities are the only things you see

When will you give me a chance to be ME

No way I can see a future

Nothing is left that i could nurture

Value you or value my dignity

Seems like a test for relation sustainability

Right or Wrong I don’t know

Either “we” stay or else “I” go

The following poem is when people are in love and cannot judge if their emotional rushes are right or wrong for the situations. Loving one makes you selfish and loving mankind makes u selfless.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-06-04 08:42 AM

This is beautiful! Welcome to Pip, dear rishikajain!

I am tempted to say that love is always right, but you have a point there with your remark in the footnote. When we want to "own" or to "possess" a person then we become indeed self-centered. Great awareness in your words.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2012-06-04 12:31 PM

Welcome to Passions! We're going to be
enjoying your thoughtful works. Please,
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Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

Startime1955
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since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-06-04 01:56 PM

Very thoughtful and well written...so true about love...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2012-06-04 02:38 PM

Either “we” stay or else “I” go

It took me a long time to learn that!

Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading more of your work.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2012-06-04 03:46 PM

Very nice and points well made.
Regarding love I believe there are different types of love and all are important.
I mean you don't love your kids and your parents the same way you love your spouse or soulmate. However, those facets of love support the all important family unit.
Loving your fellow man is also important and another form of love called agape love, also pertinent to making the world a better place.

Good reading.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2012-06-10 08:51 PM

Enjoyed...James

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