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rev black and molly pickets
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rev black and molly pickets |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the reverend black was a brown dog but blind molly said he was still pretty like what she saw with her eyes closed when she looked for god at her evenings he didn't bark at strangers at the gate much no one came to see molly there on purpose cause she always made them feel too visible and their hurt places kept them more distant molly gave him pieces of love tree fruit bit them off herself and fed him by hand said he kissed her fingers for each bite gave her empty place a full smile serving when he made wag tail music on the pickets ____________ daark |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Now this is BEAUTIFUL. Love how concise you are but get so much across. Touching scenes. When I read the title I really did expect a Johnny Cash song, see how easy it is to fool me! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Very touching and Perfectly written...I love the flow and song of this poem...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Et..thanks bromigo ___ Starfriend..thank you for the review. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
no one came to see molly there on purpose cause she always made them feel too visible Sometimes those with 20/20 vision are the most blind of all. I'm glad she had the brown rev black. *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your gift of words still amazes me D...each and every time. Much enjoyed seeing through your minds eye view today m'friend. |
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