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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you could have been may or june or july or zoeleen ambrosia, but names were just words tossed by nonchalant hands through windows of passing cars racing sundown to horizons we carved little statues in the sand shadows using our finger tip wisdom like music sounds that we could strum between the game of grains sorting second hand seconds into minute longs then holding our breath between kiss flower blooms that we lined up in rows one after another again making sure we got each one more perfectly splendid than what we remembered the previous to feel like before mutual smiles suggested contented assimilation |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Assimilation...how very perfect is that word...well written...an adventure in itself...*HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* [This message has been edited by Startime1955 (05-29-2012 05:01 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thank you star |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Some names are more than words, and important enough that they are irreplaceable. What you write is always so so. And my replies always inadequate, for that. The last of this reminded me of the Borg lol...resistance is futile, and all of that. (nerd alert) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I feel like remaining silent after absorbing or assimilating  your outstanding poem ... you give the impression of being a string instrument who plays contemporaneously all the available strings without creating chaos, but a harmony that goes beyond rational understanding. (... so much for my silence! )Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey DS Those cards are a great hand to play...smile.. Great write man. Lots of ambiguity to make fodder for imagination. I experienced this once, "contented assimilation" I had just finished a whole tub of chocolate icecream!! Oh, life can be good can't it? Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nicole...might be fun to act that one out sometime..thanks girlwoman. _________________ Ms Mar, thank you lady friend for your thoughts. ___________________ Et, friend, thanks amigo..I was raised to leave the last bite (the best bite) on the plate so as not to appear greedy..thus I have never known contentment. |
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