Open Poetry #48 |
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Words |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada ![]() |
Words Words not shared – forgotten Magical heart – not felt Dreaming of love - unknown Whispers on the wind – unheard Words not sang – just silence Moonbeam glowing – alone Starlight twinkling – not shared Falling star seen – unwished Words not written – forlorn Breath of spring – caressing Eyes full of sleep – dreaming Heart wanted – accepted Words of vision – offered Passionate kiss - tasted A tender touch – given Words of love – desired Karen Mc Neil May 28, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
May your "Words" become realized. Enjoyed, ms. e |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine writing, makes me want to read more! "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
lovely words, fine penning, thanks for the emotion, yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I hear ya, Karen. Quite a list. If only one is answered the rest will fall in line. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, Jerry and I are on the same page today... very nice... j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It feels so good that you went from "Dreaming of love - unknown" to "passionate kiss - tasted", dear Karen. A whole story unveiled in just a few highly significant and well chosen words. Excellent work. Margherita |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
May you recieve many many words of love. I really like these list types of poems they're so directly effective. Great write Karen! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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