Open Poetry #48 |
This Is Not Just Another Day |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
there are some who ridicule today and the men and women who have died for their country there are some who spit in the faces of heroes who have fought to give them the right to spit and curse war is never pretty, it is war I stand and salute the ones who have given their lives for the freedom some are using to tear us apart I bow my head to those disfigured and mentally affected from the horrors of war this is not just another day ~*~ Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.--Aristotle ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-28-2012 06:52 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're right Jerry War is never nice. It's hard to fathom some forms of disrespect in this world today. To curse and spit on anyone is impossible to be right. I agree with you, those disfigured and mentally damaged from such action never need to be used in such a manner as degrading as you write here. Strong words my friend! Needed words! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Eric, for the kind words you have penned about my patriotic poem today. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Amen, Jerry. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Ida. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
A day to remember and to salute all who have served our country, so that we may live in peace. Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Ms. E, for your wonderful patriotic comment. Makes me proud. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I have just watched a documentary on tv with many interviews to survivors and it was extremely moving. The silence of those huge cemeteries over here speaks for itself. I appreciate your words. And no, this is not just another day. We need to remember and to honor those who succeeded in stopping the consequences of the folly of a criminal mind, sacrificing their lives. Peace, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate you coming by and adding your comments to the rest, Margherita ,thank you very much. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Having been raised in the military and then raising my children in it your poem touches deeply...my heart goes out to all who serve that we may live free...returning men and women often have unseen wounds that last thier lifetime...Thank you so much for this very powerful poem...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you so much, Karen. Yes, the unseen mental scars are sometimes the worst kind. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is wonderful my friend, truly a tirbute to the day. Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I loved the title... and nodded with each line of the poem. Freedom isn't free - and a couple of days a year isn't nearly enough to say thanks to those who pay the price. Thank you for this! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you suthern. My kind of people. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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