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Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-05-23 12:59 PM

Spring Rain

All day dark clouds gather
Surrounding on each side
A red warning goes out
But it is to the north

Two systems will converge
And they may be severe
Might bring hail and great winds
Could be a tornado

Ozone fills our nostrils
There’s dampness in the air
Even more clouds gather
Can this be the bad one

Strong winds are increasing
We start to feel the chill
We all say here it comes
Just a gentle Spring Rain

Karen Mc Neil
May 22, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-05-23 05:56 AM

Yeah, but you can never be for certain, can you, Karen? I like your photo.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

HippinTrippy
Member

since 2010-03-26

Posts 103
New York

2 posted 2012-05-23 02:20 PM

I like this very much. It reminds me somewhat of one of the reasons I love poetry so..

There is so much to take from this, and I am sure most everyone takes something a little different.

It's all a matter of perspective.. One mans floor, is another mans cieling.

One must learn to appreciate things for what they are, and what they may become. In doing so they will achieve a true happiness that resinates so deeply, it can be felt by those nearby, without a note spoken.

Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.

It's not easy being evil, in a world gone to hell.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2012-05-23 04:56 PM

Never know do we.
I love this!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2012-05-23 05:48 PM

JerryPat2
*grin* one never knows...*sigh* so frustrating...beware the picture...it is about 10 years old but it will do until I get another one...Thanks...*HUGS*

HippinTrippy
I am glad you like it...life is so interesting and I think poets say it best...I love to read my own visions in others work...*HUGS*

Eric
I so miss the storms you have down east...these ones start out all right and then follow the river bottom...Taber is in this little pocket where all the really bad stuff goes around us...*sigh* again they are calling for a thunder storm...I can only hope and pray we get it here...strangest weather I have ever seen...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

5 posted 2012-05-24 03:17 PM

I loved the poem and spring rain. I love it most when it brings out the plants inner beauty. No one knows what's to come, even so it's still magnificent when it rolls in. Simply enjoyed

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2012-05-24 03:24 PM

There is something rewarding
to the senses, in a spring storm.
Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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