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Open Poetry #48
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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2012-05-20 09:47 PM

Forest twilight ___
moonlit shadow-dance

Misty lake
one heron___
and the morning star


          --- b. e. adams jr. (5/20/2012)
© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Startime1955
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1 posted 2012-05-20 11:31 PM

I am not sure how you can weave such incredible visions with so few words but I think it is because I take the vision and expand it...Beautiful Spring Dawn...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*
latearrival
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2 posted 2012-05-20 11:50 PM

this is beautiful and I can see the vision  through your words. jo
rabittlover
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3 posted 2012-05-31 11:56 AM

Thanks for the nifty poem.
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