She - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-05-19 05:41 AM

she influences me
like the Harvest Moon
inspires lovers
like . . .
tides ebb and flow
calling to Neptune
like . . .
the petals
of a rose opening
giving to the world what it can
she . . .
shapes my days
like the sunrise each morning
I breathe in her earthiness
nectar of Goddess
my world
has become . . . she

©May 1, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2012-05-19 05:53 AM

Wow! Concise but says so much between the lines and really one of your best romantics yet.

"like . . .
the petals
of a rose opening
giving to the world what it can"

Yeah, that's real poetic romance at work.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-05-19 05:55 AM

Nice comments, especially coming from you, Eric. They are much appreciated.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2012-05-19 09:54 AM

Now that's some lovely worship.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-05-19 10:24 AM

Good morning, Karen, and thank you so much for stopping by with your kind words.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-05-19 03:28 PM

Oh, JP! This is sooo beautiful.
It touched my heart...just beautiful.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-05-19 03:33 PM

Ms. E, and you reached out and touched me with that comment. Thank you, thank you very much.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2012-05-19 05:22 PM

Love looks sooo good on you my friend! This is fantastic!

Lori

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2012-05-19 05:46 PM

Love wrapped in beautiful words...This vision is stunning...great writing...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-05-19 05:47 PM

Thanks, Lori, I appreciate it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-05-19 05:48 PM

Hi Karen. You're swelling my head. Don't stop. Haha Thank you so much.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

11 posted 2012-05-20 08:50 PM

Well brother, this is some poem!
Excellent!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2012-05-20 08:58 PM

Thank you, my friend, I appreciate the heck of of your words.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Street Poet
Member

since 2002-07-07

Posts 82

13 posted 2012-05-20 11:30 PM

This poem is very powerful. The imagery is so intense. Great Job.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

14 posted 2012-05-21 05:23 AM

Thank you very much, Street Poet.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.