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Open Poetry #48

Candles Two (senru)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-05-12 07:19 AM

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I lit a candle
She lit her candle from mine
And our love simmered

Â©May 12, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-05-12 07:52 AM

Flame burns within flame:
calm togetherness is felt
till passion winds blow

Dear Jerry, you inspire with this beautiful senryu.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-05-12 08:13 AM

Thank you, Margherita, for the lovely senryu in answer to mine.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-05-12 07:46 PM

Way cool you two! Gotta love it!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-05-12 07:52 PM

Thanks, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2012-05-12 10:40 PM

Nice pic Jerry
Love the idea of the two flames turning up the heat in this writing.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2012-05-12 11:12 PM

Beautifully romantic...I love it...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

7 posted 2012-05-13 02:02 AM

Enjoying the flame, JP.
ms. e

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-05-13 06:51 AM

Thanks, Eric, and yes, it does take two.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-05-13 06:52 AM

Thank you, Karen, for your kind words and the hug.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-05-13 06:53 AM

ms. e, without the flames there is nothing.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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