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Like You Were Made For Each Other
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Like You Were Made For Each Other |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Like You Were Made For Each Other You think I am jealous of your new home... Dew reflects the sunlight Fresh, cut grass permiates The quaint, white picket fense They say love changes us But he wont be the one Even if you were made for each other Little fly, do you think the spider cares? -Juju |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
girl, you could never be jealous of anything! You are so beautiful that nothing need worry you, but you know that.  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Juju Your poetry always thrills me...Thanks for your talent... regards yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juju, Please remember that danger always lurks behind quaint, white picket fences. It’s best to stay away. Love Bobby |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Some women Are content Being eaten . |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Vibrantly cryptic, enjoyed reading... Thank you. Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow this is very powerful. The use of the spider and new love and the pretense of white picket fences work so well here...very clever, dark and poignant. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
didn't see that one coming...neatly spoken...exquisitely told |
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