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Open Poetry #46

Break-up Poetry

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-04-01 06:26 PM

Break-up Poetry

How can I believe
that love is true
if you break-up with me
and break my heart in two.

Then again, if I wasn't
so in love with you
I'd probably want
to break-up too.

JamesLee
01April
2010

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2010-04-01 07:44 PM

Well said!!! I know how this feels lately!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2010-04-01 11:34 PM

You will love again. Chin up.

Juli

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2010-04-01 11:53 PM

this is good! I Love it!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2010-04-02 06:45 AM

James? I sure do hope this is not about you and your lady.

A

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2010-04-02 11:40 AM

hang up James, love is sometimes unconstant but it last with ups and downs...I love the translucid emotion of your beautiful poem...

regards

yann

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

6 posted 2010-04-03 11:33 PM

Yep, been there... felt that.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

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