Open Poetry #46 |
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CPR. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. ![]() |
I picked you up, limp in my arms "Lifeless." you told me. No, not lifeless, I said. Just limp. I pushed on your chest moving love through your veins blew laughter into your lungs repeated the process a few times tilted you on your side when you coughed up sadness I laughed and said: "See? Just limp." __________________________________ (s)pam. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
A poetic treat that should get rave reviews. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I love the way you express yourself....it's very softly moving. And I wish that someone would perform this kind of CPR on me! A lot of us probably need this kind~ |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This might be my favorite. I have to go back and start a Paul file - would you mind if I saved these? Ali-boop-boop-ba-doop |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Earl... Thank you kindly. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Honeybee... I'll buy you a beer, and we'll go from there. ![]() Aliboo... Thank you, dearest. No, I do not mind. ![]() Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
amazing! |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
fanks. ![]() Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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