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Open Poetry #46

Our Destiny

Paul D. Hennigan
Member

since 2009-02-03

Posts 52
Texas USA

0 posted 2010-03-16 05:14 AM

The majestic mountains so tall and grand
Beauty from afar as they tower to the sky
Treacherous steps that lead to the top
You have given me such a mountain to climb

To love you a daunting task so it seems
The heartaches and perils that prick the soul
Your mind on the path, never knowing where it leads
A challenge even for a heart that remains bold

My life is sometimes in such frenzied disarray
From the what ifs and maybes of my mind
But with eyes steady on the path that I seek
I promise this mountain somehow to climb

Never to forsake you, best friend of my life
A goal i know to the end i can't afford to fail
Your loving kindness brings joy to my soul
Forever in each others heart we will dwell

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2010-03-21 04:35 AM

appreciated your words, sentiments are so important...

regards

yann

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2010-03-21 11:14 AM

part of the struggles that we all come
against, thanx for sharing this.

GBride
Senior Member

since 2009-07-02

Posts 538

3 posted 2010-03-24 05:52 PM

"...from the what-ifs and maybes..."
if only we could be free from the what ifs and maybes.
Loved the poem!

Paul D. Hennigan
Member

since 2009-02-03

Posts 52
Texas USA

4 posted 2010-03-24 11:59 PM

Thanks for the kind words!

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