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Open Poetry #46

Change My Ways

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2010-03-21 09:06 PM

Change My Ways

I'll whisper you naught
To what kings will promise

For I'm a causality
To your bloated ego

This broken record plays
Before my eyes and soul

Makes me wonder how long
Till love wont cause this pain

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2010-03-21 09:15 PM

..."For I'm a causality
To your bloated ego"

Wonderful phasing...especially the above, but all you write...much enjoy reading you...anytime.

j.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2010-03-23 03:11 AM

Love will always cause pain.

That is the nature of love.
I like your writings.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

3 posted 2010-03-23 08:32 AM

Love equals pain.
Love this.
But no pain in reading. lol

Wonderful writing.

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

4 posted 2010-03-23 10:44 AM

Love and pain---the "immovable object meets the irresistible force"! -- the continuing story of passion and enigma. A splendid poem --

Art

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2010-03-23 10:58 PM

Wow, this is powerful, especially because I'm going through this right now....I especially loved the lines "For I'm a causality to your bloated ego"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2010-03-29 08:56 PM

Fine writing...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2010-03-30 08:05 AM

You are enjoyable to read, Juju

M

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