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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Its the flash of a smile lost in the essence of a tumble down main street district pubs laughing out loud at the dust singing old 80's songs to the beat of the shoes clapping in rythem of the mood that shuffles us along our path. One look ahead and the forrest opens up as the stars light the way the moon trips blue as your eyes find a light configuration of time eternal that you cast neither shadow nor doubt as to their meaning. And suttle distant words that you use to push boundries that flow from you to protect your skin your soul damaged but healing you face challenges you may have to change your tactics to save your heart. Then slowly,with passions purpose you follow that fleeting memory of taste, touch, feel take flight with hope take hope and run with your face to the wind your arms open you may just embrace this hope. |
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Brooks M Junior Member
since 2010-05-26
Posts 19California |
I love how you write and how you put your whole heart into it.... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh this is such a great message! Hope, fatih and love is the core of our existance. Sure, we adjust as we go, so long as we don't lose sight of what truly matters. Glad I found this, it's quite uplifting and ummm, full of hope!  Really nice writing, thanks~ |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
"you may have to change your tactics to save your heart" I loved this whole piece, but that line stuck out for some reason. Well done. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~feeling that swagger~*~ ~niiiice |
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