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Open Poetry #46

Within Your Silence

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-03-17 08:59 AM

Here I find myself yet again
Holding onto nothing
Losing my breath, lack of oxygen
Hearing on the wind, nothing

Your silence cruel and usual
I suffer the slings and arrows
Living our lives in dual
Instead of as one, I suppose

It may be improper to speak
These thoughts out loud
But I need to implore, beseech
Before I lay under shroud

So in acquiescence I find
A solace somehow it can bring
I fill your silence with my mind
As ever, to heal the nothing

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2010-03-17 11:07 AM

very painful

silence can be golden but indeed it can be cruel

StarlitMind
Junior Member

since 2010-03-17

Posts 12
New England

2 posted 2010-03-17 05:39 PM

Hey, I'm new to the forum, but I've already come across a few of your pieces. They're all excellent, but I liked this one in particular. Filling silence with mind. You really made nothingness into something real and moving

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