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Open Poetry #46

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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-03-16 09:01 AM

We are all cosmic debris
Flotsam and jetsam
You and me
I hold onto all the treasure
That you send
More than any measure
Always it seems
Our desires undisclosed

I fall deeper within
You and me
Our very own pretend
A world full of grace
Starlight and Heaven
For only us to trace
Always it seems
Our desires undisclosed

We disintegrate each other
Glorious you and me
To reconstruct one another
Time has come to proclaim
Whisper for us to hear
To speak now with no shame
Today it seems
Our desires be disclosed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2010-03-16 09:27 AM

time's too short for leaving things unsaid

especially something as wonderful as desire

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2010-03-16 09:32 AM

Thank you Dixie.

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

3 posted 2010-03-16 10:36 AM

This splendid poem begins with the enigma of our cosmic origins, then unfolds into the realm of desire, and the quest for fulfillment. I love the way the moment arrives, love is at the ready, at the divine moment of being disclosed. A very satisfying read, my young friend!

Art

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2010-03-16 10:39 AM

Thank you very much Art. I wish I was young too. lol

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

5 posted 2010-03-16 03:49 PM

The heart wants, what the heart wants. Very nice write.

Zeitgeist.

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