Open Poetry #46 |
Inspired by Waves of Love |
Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
Dear Marg. You have so many replies that you probably won’t even remember Little Me, one of your anonymous admirers. But … Well at first I instinctively chose not to read this poem because I knew what it would do to me, giving me a rosy glow of rising anticipation, and it would force me to imagine what this poem might be like. But finally I could wait no longer. Marg … In all my life I don’t think I have ever read anything so sensual, so personal, so plaintive, so passionate. But surely you have heard all this before … How comforting is such an elemental fantasy when I lie in bed alone, because it tells me that, maybe, I’m really not alone at all … that even as I fantasize someone fantasizes too, whom I have never met or even heard of yet, because it shows me that’s the way we humans were meant to be; together, bearing and whispering to each other our secret hopes, desires and dreams; Not isolated, apart and alone, But part of each other, in bed of Night, where flimsy fabrics can dissolve in the tidal surge of our desire a desire that can no longer be denied. Together, carefree pleasure and in love. Maybe I’m not really as alone As I may sometimes think or fret I am, Even though I’m not getting any younger, Even though the years are slowly passing. But perhaps My selfish dreams of Night may soon come real? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Jaime, it's so nice that you felt inspired to write these poetic ponderings after reading my poem. I am happy that I have found this now, after a busy day. Yes, we are meant to love and to express our desires, we are meant to dream and to enjoy the manifestation of our dreams. You say it beautifully and don't you ever think that age separates us from our heart's desire. We are able to love, to give and to receive until our last breath. Thank you for this intense write. I hope many others will read it, because you expressed your feelings in a very captivating way. No, you are not alone, we are all One. Love and joy! Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jaime... you've done a fine job honoring Margherita so well... she's a lovely poet, a good friend, and a passionate writer. Bless your heart! |
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