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Remembering for Marge....
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Remembering for Marge.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Cloudreams... looking out and up this day...the skies were painted blue the many shades from light to dark were deepest of it's hues the cardinals flew with food in mouth to land on lines and rest before they carried on their way, to feed those in their nest the sun it's brightest of the day, shone yellow-gold in heat emitting rays much brighter than behind those clouds' retreat a butterfly had landed on the lilac's purple bloom and all I did was paint these words, in mind within this room my fantasy of life would be to fly the clouds in dreams and paint the skies with thoughts of love like sprinkles on ice cream the rainbow colors of real you see from shades of blue to green are better than rose colored ones, a pretense of what is seen and one more glance I took, before returning to my bed the beauty of the sweetest rose, the one so deeply red was opening up it's bud to me, another color bright but now must leave the painted world and close my eyes tonight... MM 6.07.99 "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Martie~~ I wrote this for Marge ages ago. She was my first internet poet friend elsewhere. I was looking over some of my first poems wondering why I can't write like that anymore  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Beautiful, dear Maureen. Dear Marge is always in our hearts too and I am sure she enjoys your gift. And you write most beautifully even now, don't underestimate your talent! Love, Margherita  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
my fantasy of life would be to fly the clouds in dreams and paint the skies with thoughts of love like sprinkles on ice cream Dear Maureen, this is a beautiful poem A real delight to read, much enjoyed.love Lindsay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...missing Marge's fresh thoughts upon these pages...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Honey, we don't write "like that" anymore because of all of our wonderfully unique internet poet friends' influences. We've grown. I don't even want to think where I might be now, if not for the magical influences of PiP, and our members. |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Hi Maur!!! ~wavin' frantically~ this writing is top-notch! each line smoothly connects with the succeeding one. Very cool, and that the fact it was for Marge makes it a treasure. I'm sorry to hear about your flareup. My best buddy has what you have. Makes holding a job tough for him. I'm healing up a bit: kept waking up every 20 minutes by a stiff cough. Never got to the dream stage.... udder-wize, we be doin' all right! Jeff |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful M. It is nice to remember our gal Marge. Hugs |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This is a beautiful tribute to Marge. It tells us she will never be forgotten by those who learned to know her which is to love her. Thank you, latearrival |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Marge was special, no doubt about it. She was one of the first to welcome me to PIP many years ago... j. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful! I miss the Poetess and her lovely work. I miss her grandgirlies. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thnx...very deserved remarks..Thnx M. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
This touches me tenderly, Maureen, as I remember a sweet lady, whom I was just beginning to know, who left an indelible memory in my heart, though too brief our friendship on this earthly plane. Thanks for this splendid song of remembrance -- Art |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very touching Maureen. Nicely done! Eric |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
It is snowing here where I am in Idaho and your lovely poem gave me a longing for spring, Spring always comes again enen after the darkest hours in our lives. Billie Cullimore |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Maureen this is very beautiful. Marge would love it. I think about her all the time. |
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