Pleasure of the Aftertaste

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Open Poetry #46

Pleasure of the Aftertaste

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-03-08 05:47 PM

Pleasure of the Aftertaste

Nothing taste as
delicious as an apple,
except for you
and the taste
of your delicious kiss.
Must be the effort
you put into it
and the pleasure
of the aftertaste.

JamesLee
09March
2010

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2010-03-09 07:09 AM

Hello James, your poem is delicious as an apple.

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2010-03-09 07:08 PM

... must be the love that tastes so deliciously!

I think I will have an apple now.

Very nice.

Love,
Margherita

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

3 posted 2010-03-09 07:08 PM

Like silent thunder! then so sensuous, the taste (essence) that lingers after the kiss. A powerful write, James.

Art

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2010-03-09 09:44 PM

Hey, hey...let's hear it for the after taste!!

j

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

5 posted 2010-03-09 09:57 PM

A clever metaphor. I will never think of apples in the same way!

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2010-03-10 09:42 PM

Nice one James, enjoyed.

Lindsay

Billie Cullimore
Member

since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

7 posted 2010-03-15 03:56 AM

Apples ah, the taist, the smell, the sight, all delightful.

Billie C.

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