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Open Poetry #46

She is like Water

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-03-08 04:03 PM

She is like water
That I am floating in
Floating helpless upon her
As the water comes seeping in

Her water warm to the touch
Clean and pure
Her water heals so much
Providing me a cure
From the mortal disease
For when I find myself wet,
It’s as if my heart seized
And I was not born just yet

While her currents may take me
To many a different shore,
Her love’s an endless sea,
Her beauty’s as deep as the seas are
She is like water
That I am drowning in
But I am allowing her
To slowly take me in

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-03-09 07:25 PM

Very captivating, dear J., your words did bring the emotions promised by the title.

Love,
Margherita

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