Open Poetry #46 |
Bones Visits Dad |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones was sitting at home with the family. Word came that Bones Dad was dying and wanted to see him. Bones Dad was in a Veteran’s Hospital down in Georgia, because Dad was a hero in World War II. Yes he was. World War II was kind of too much for Bones Dad. Yes it was. Bones took his oldest daughter along. Bones and his daughter stayed in Georgia for the funeral. They brought Dad’s flag home, along with his metals. Bones wishes his Dad could have had a happier life. Bones Dad didn’t deserve to die locked up most of his life. Bones Dad was a violent man, Who was bad with guns. Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Alas, this is so touching and sad, Bobby. Bones has carried so many weights upon his shoulders from his youth up. He is strong, indeed! I really enjoyed this somber, but strangely uplifting poem. Thanks--- Art |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, I'm pleased you found some good in this. Bones says the only moral obligation we have in this life is to do the best, and most good, with the hand we're dealt. Bones/Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very sad. Ida |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sad how that is for Bone's Dad. Bones turned out pretty good in spite of it. A |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, For reading and your comments. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, Well, you know what Bones says-- "What you see is what you get." Love Bones/Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I guess good poems never conclude as the reader expects. You certianly threw me for a loop with this one. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Earl, Thanks for the kind words. This story happens quite often. Bobby |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
I'll call you Bones when you are silly and fun and Bobby when you are serious. O.K. My heart goes with you, it is always hard to loose a loved one. But you are lucky to have had your daughter with you. our children can be such a comfort. Those we love don't always do as we would like them to do, this goes for children as will as parents,but we all have our free agency to live our lives as we see fit. God help us all. Billie C. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Billie C, For your kind words. Love Bobby |
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