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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
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I hope it’s not too late I hope that you’re not sleeping But these words I have they just cant wait I hope that you can read them Cause every time I try to write you My thoughts just start to roam So I’ll have to say I love you In a poem I bet that I’m too late I bet that you are dreaming But I hope you know before you wake Your love will never leave me Cause every time I try to write you My thoughts just start to roam So I have to say I love you In a poem You fell into my heart And there I’ll always keep you I hope our love will never part I know I’ll never leave you Cause every time I try to write you My thoughts just start to roam So I have to say I love you In a poem I hope you never have no doubts You’re everything I’ve needed Our love is what it’s all about I love you more than dearly Cause every time I try to write you My thoughts just start to roam So I have to say I love you In a poem |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
she will love this i am happy you are back |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Aww Helen, you should see the big smile you just put on my face! Thank you for that!  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I can't imagine anyone not loving this - your love is so special, Richard. I, too, am so happy you are here again. Don't ever be gone for too long, okay? A |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
lol the inspritation for this poem is Jim Croce's song, I'll have to say I love you in a song. Sound familiar now lol. Thank you Ali dear for just being who you are. When the wind shifts thouth, and my sail is full, I will leave again, but I'll be back, I'll always come back as long as there are some of my dear sweet friends here, just like you. Thank you my dear! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Now I can sing it - and I am just gonna have to make sure always to take the wind outta your sails!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, this is song-like, it brings joy and visions of dream-love on sailboats under blue skies. Very lovely! Love, Margherita |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Why do you think I float back here Ali dear, its because poems and comments from people like you and my dear friend Margy here, do take the wind out of my sails, and the breath from my heart. Thank you two so much! You two will forever be, beautiful islands just over my horizon. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I see you've been listening to some good ole classic rock the 70s were awesome ey? yep and i think you are too dear Richard |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Yes the 70's were a magical time weren't they, things have changed so much, and not all for the better by any stretch. I'm lucky to have met you Dixie, and even luckier to have you as a friend! Thanks dear. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I love you in a poem, I love you in a song, I love you in a daydream, come and dream along. I love you in three little words that leave my soul a sigh, I love you from the heart, and eternity, by and by, Will come to know the reason that heaven is meant to stay ~ Because I love you breathes forever, forever and a day. Poetry is magic, Richy, and life its alchemy, so much of the time, when we allow it to take seed. Even when love is all effort, I couldn't help thinking what a wonder it is to feel those words come from that adoreable one...  Klassy [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (03-08-2010 03:37 AM).] |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Excuse me adorable Karen, did you know that I just fell in love with you right now? Don't tell anyone though okay, people might start thinking I'm spoken for and stop replying to my poems lol It will be our little secret though okay? Seriously, that was about the sweetest thing anyone ever wrote for me, thank you dear one, that really touched my heart! Richard |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I won't tell if you won't! You'll have to forgive my unruly rhyming child. She couldn't resist. LOL |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
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