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Staring Into The Sun. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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My hands were like miniature moons covered in callouses, a few craters some minerals on my fingertips and a little deep below the surface. My hands were like miniature moons orbiting your hips and thighs circling and circling the woman parts heating, and melting my minerals. I was like a planet, in the dark large, covered in salt water orbiting you with purpose. I was like a planet, in the dark with a magma center, molten rock and desire. You were like the sun and the rest was unimportant. ___________________________________ (S)Pam.--- part of Falling In Love Alone. (miniseries, maybe a majorseries.) Paul Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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DrK&7 Junior Member
since 2009-07-01
Posts 40 |
Nice work. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
As always, Paul, you leave me thinking how much your poetry touches me. Working man words - I like that about you. A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Drk... Thanks sir. Or ma'am.  Aliboo... Sweet Aliboo, thank you so very mucho. You're the bomb. and you read most all my poems. I appreciate it. You keep me writing. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I read them all, Paul. Just slow about responding sometimes. Wrote on a lot of them last night. You are among my very favorite poets! A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"... and the rest was unimportant". I bet it was! Passionately creative! Love, Margopargo  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks margorious pargoonus maximus. You're a doll.  Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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