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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-03-01 11:02 AM

Devastation
Destruction

Ruin,
All I ever seem to bring,
And misery follows
Wherever I go

It might be better
If I was alone
And spared everyone
From my mind

All I ever wanted
Was something
And now I have
Nothing

And that’s all I deserve,

My ruination

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

1 posted 2010-03-01 11:17 AM

This is absolutely wicked good...

Nice write, but cheer up. I'll buy you a beer.

P

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2010-03-01 11:19 AM

lol
Thanks Paul.

But, "a" beer for me usually winds up a case. lol

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-03-01 12:31 PM

This is a powerful psychological self-analysis, but of course, dear Jerry, you are too severe with yourself. You must have temporaneously forgotten Who you really are! You are everything you are meant to be, believe me.

Love,
Margherita

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

4 posted 2010-03-01 12:34 PM

What am I meant to be? lol

thank you Margherita.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2010-03-01 12:42 PM

You are meant to be yourself, remembering that you are a spark of the divine Source you come from. You are experiencing love in all of its forms and sometimes it can be hurtful. You can change the perception of yourself right now. Instead of thinking that you bring ruin, you can consider that everything you do is constructive, it is part of your "performance" while learning to grow in the awareness of your true nature ...

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2010-03-01 04:00 PM

we ask foreverly that question

you are a beautiful person, a gorgeous man
you are meant

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

7 posted 2010-03-01 09:42 PM

Beer is an multiplier of excellence.

There are, um... studies on it.

Yep.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2010-03-01 11:02 PM

Chalmette Guy - life continues on, and tomorrow or the day after and after things change for the better. Keep writing, it helps. I know it does for me...

BC

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2010-03-02 04:23 PM

All I ever wanted
Was something
And now I have
Nothing

And that’s all I deserve

I disagree....

and you cant have "nothig" look around you life is good....cheer up, &smile....

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

10 posted 2010-03-02 06:02 PM

Hey Guy I like your dark side !
Your right you don't deserve nothing, In fact you suck lol....

Just trying to help you write more dark poetry...

Really tho...its good and you rock. Keep branching out dude.

Zeitgeist

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