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Open Poetry #46

despondent

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

0 posted 2010-02-25 05:08 PM

despondent

winter’s cold evening
touching my despondent heart
why are you elsewhere

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-02-25 05:12 PM

Elsewhere does not mean "no connection", so I do hope your despondent heart will make you feel the closeness that you miss, but exists I am sure.

Intense!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

2 posted 2010-02-25 08:46 PM

Such economy of words, emotions compressed into a powerful poem. I hope the question in the final line will have a satisfying reply.

Regards ---Art

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2010-02-25 09:34 PM

I want to wrap up hot chocolate with schnapps, a favorite book and cd of music in a bundle of hugs and send it all to you.

xoxoox
Alison

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