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Open Poetry #46

Inside My Mind

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-02-25 12:18 PM

They can see
Without really seeing
They can exist
Without really being
What would they do
If confronted by you?
Something only time could measure
No gold nor jewels in this treasure
And when I’m alone
Inside my mind,
Nothing transpires, nothing hurts

Inside my mind

A place to go
Without ever leaving
A faith somehow
Without even believing
My body wrecked and shattered
But none of this matters
There’s a garden where I go
In which the seeds of life grow
And when I’m alone
Inside my mind,
Nothing transpires, nothing hurts

Inside my mind

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2010-02-25 01:22 PM

All through college I practiced TM and it sure worked to keep me grounded. I can sure identify with this write, as I to this day, still can shut off the world and just drift into my mind.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2010-02-25 01:45 PM

penetrating words, powerful poem that tells a lot.

regards

yann

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

3 posted 2010-02-25 08:51 PM

Through it all, I find my mind to be my refuge, and you have articulated my own thoughts with such eloquence. ---Art

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