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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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woman of the white hound walking with tattoos on calves on purpose to show the gods her standing place not the shadows of her charms there lest they whisper temptation voices and she becomes the wind again along an azure brim of smiling sea sipping the foam of hesitating storms she reads the poems of my gypsy pen like the grave stones of immortals captions that will never be love songs or lens on the eyes of those loving blind and a smile then is her finger tip residue ___________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Extremely captivating and stirring.... still there is a note of non-fulfillment. Wonderfully rendered. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...humble thanks lady friend |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I was going to try to pick a favorite line. *Impossible* What a beautiful treat to find your words here Dark. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks GS....grin |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Daark Where you been? I just breathed this poem in and loved it. Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san... thank you for the eyes...am still around between storms. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
yet again this poem deserves a DAMN!  Just like all the others!You master imagery and the message extraordinarily well. Every line is perfection and I love to read your words and through your expression I get to wear your eyes for a while  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms bee... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"an azure brim of smiling sea captions that will never be love songs" I love these two lines...and your definition of a smile...nice write |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i can't pick a favorite line in your poem because they are all great...expertly penned! You are amazingly talented. Excellent work. faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
stev' thanks amigo _________________ ms faith..thanks ms for the eyes..I appreciate your reads |
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