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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2010-02-16 11:45 AM

falling, a lonesome feather
leads the way
for the still lifed leaf
straddling the warped branch

snow becomes
routine and retro

loved and despised

a new theasaurus writes
a lexicon
filled with all its derivatives

this winter is too too much
for the golden goddess

raggae sings on sirius

marley fills my too cold bones

i am solo

and it feels fine

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2010-02-16 12:58 PM

What a cool state of mind to be in.

Pleasure to read this, Inked.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2010-02-16 01:36 PM

fantastic!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-02-16 06:58 PM

Nice...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2010-02-16 07:35 PM

You are beautifully inspired, dear Michele!

Solo can make us feel this way.

Love,
Margherita

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2010-02-16 08:48 PM

Don’t see how you could be solo in anything Michelle?
Well, except for being you of course. Which like an oasis
on a secluded island, is a beautiful thing to be.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-02-17 08:56 AM

ms inki...guess you know my thoughts on this one don't you...(grin)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2010-02-21 12:48 PM

inkedgoddess - raggae is the beat, a cool Bahama Mama, and someone to dance. Now that is a most stunning thought...

BC

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2010-02-25 10:29 PM

You wear your poetry well, inked one. You show a great deal of style in your writing.

A

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

9 posted 2010-02-26 05:15 PM

I am solo

and it feels fine.

Remarkable lines, being at peace in the serenity of being alone; there is no whining here, just a sense of resolute contentment. I enjoyed this immensely!

Regards ---Art

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2010-03-01 08:27 AM

thanks everyone for stopping by

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