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Speech Bubbles.
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Speech Bubbles. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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you spoke in speech bubbles words fluttering from your mouth they floated right to me like seeds from some dandelion rooted in kindness and watered with love you spoke in speech bubbles they floated right over my head pushed towards me by beautiful wind that was your sigh of breath washing back and forth like a tide those bubbles hued with wonder stemming from your eyes they popped and clapped clapped like thunder right over my head. _______________________________ Leaf, Overturned. (New Series.) I wrote this in my head about.... 15 hours ago, I know this isn't exactly how I wrote it. This is okay, though. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Extraordinary, dear Paul! You may have written it even better in your head, but what you kept in mind and shared is the very best and most beautiful that I have seen from your pen. Wow! Amazing in its loveliness. Love, Margopargo   |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you spoke in speech bubbles words fluttering from your mouth they floated right to me"  diggin it Paul |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Margopargo, you flatter me, and I love you for it. Thank you mademoiselle. Suesea, love, thank you. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Paul, This is a good concept. Speech bubbles floating like seeds from a dandelion. Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks broseidon. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
viking_metal - indeed, it's not only ok, it's great. Liked this a lot... BC |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks sir, you do me an honor by even reading it. I appreciate the kind words, however undeserved. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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