»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #46
»
In the absence
| Open Poetry #46 |
|
In the absence |
|
|
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
|
Colors draping their shoulders at the coroner's call, parallel to the stark of your passing in the image of waves over sea I saunter, adrift in the absence, lost to the wordlessness, the dour sensation that you lay now in the twilight's first dimension though I cling to that faint light that mystifies morning in the alternating rises between somber and radiant, that rewind to your glory [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-13-2010 04:08 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2010 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Wow, this is exactly the mood I am in right now. You render these kind of thoughts so well. |
||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I am so grateful to read your works again and send a prayer, as I sense a loss you have suffered. Hugs Michelle. |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is so extremely touching and exquisitely expressed. I missed you. Love, Margherita  |
||
|
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
your absence has been noticed ... never enough time in a day you know where to reach me CT |
||
|
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Michelle, your picture is an absolute vision, its breathtaking (okay try to compose yourself, breathe, breathe ha). I'm so sorry for your loss. Your poem, like everything else was beautiful. Happy Valentines Goddess.  |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michelle - the deepness of your writing touches, lovely... BC |
||
|
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you all for stopping by. nice to scibble again here on the pages of pip |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
