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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-02-09 12:41 PM

My muse has deserted me

Never before have I been so blind
As darkness fills the void in my mind
Not until I am deserted by she,
Who used to be my best friend
Now she’s a million miles away
And I lose my grip every day
Is this the beginning or the end?
Just another one
With wheels come undone
No more paths to run
In the setting of the sun

My muse has deserted me

And took with her my thoughts
Leaving only traces of my heart
Memories of the one I used to be
No more dark spectre mistress
No more flowers of grey
No more words to say
And ignorance is not bliss
It feels like a heart attack
As if my spirit wracked
I know I’ll never get it back
I know now there is only black

My muse has deserted me

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2010-02-09 01:20 PM

I think your darkness is really light,
A perfect poem is in my sight!

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2010-02-09 03:43 PM

I feel for ja, brudda.

Chin up, sir, you wrote a great poem about it.

enjoyed, and related to.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2010-02-09 04:35 PM

She just went for a skiing trip...because we know there's no snow in the southern climes...

Enjoyed, Sir!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2010-02-10 04:45 AM

I think she will be back,

they do this kind of thing often lol!

~ARH

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2010-02-10 05:45 AM

quote:
I know I’ll never get it back
I know now there is only black

My muse has deserted me

Now, dear Jerry, all you need to do is to transform these negative affirmations into positive and your Muse will love your confidence.

I know I will get it back
I will be able to clear the black

My muse will delight me anew ...

and then see what happens!

Very good rendition of your state of mind.

Love,
Margherita

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2010-02-10 09:15 AM

bleh. my muse went *poof*

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