Open Poetry #46 |
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Winter Dance |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Winter Dance Our perception completes each fine image on such a night of white-winter moon painted on its background of gentle stars above the wide silver river running forever along its homeless way through these endless mountain forests. Here the tender, unbound spirit may dance in harmonious stillness with all that is living and that which is not. --- b. e. adams (12/30/2010) |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Your offering had a very Native American feel to it... perfect for the environmentalist in you. An enjoyable read. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I often enjoy a walk in the moonlight ... a clear winter night, air clean and crisp, snow crunching with each footstep ... nature's intent, the only sound ... ![]() enjoyed |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Here the tender, unbound spirit may dance in harmonious stillness with all that is living and that which is not." Beautiful conclusion to a vivid word picture of peace and well being. Superb write Bruce! Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your Celtic spirit lights up your mountain forests beautifully, Bruce. Your words are magick. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Poignant and exquisite, Bruce. Owl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You and your poetry are an inspiration to me. Your wording and your visuals are so concise. I absolutely adore the clean lines and surrounding beauty. Always a pleasure to read you, dp~ |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Ethel |
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