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Open Poetry #46

Sharpened to the Point

SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

0 posted 2010-12-30 05:50 PM

It's not me
It's the desperation of humanity
Everyone's searching for something to feel
Something to love
Someone to hurt
So at the end of the day
We can say there was somebody
Somebody just a little more stupid than us

Emily Shives
December 30th 2010

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2010-12-30 07:03 PM

enjoyed this piece ... interesting twist on the last line ... I guess there are days when I agree and days that sneak by, undetected, unclassified or just ordinary

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2010-12-30 08:06 PM

Kinda goes without saying, eh? although you said it quite well.

To mimic is a form of praise unless
you have no thoughts of your own

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

3 posted 2010-12-30 10:09 PM

You've said quite a bit on the human condition in so few words. No doubt I've been on both sides of that coin. I bow to you and yours.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2010-12-31 12:44 PM

Ditto that Emily! Great write!
Lori

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2010-12-31 12:49 PM

keeps us always next to the bottom..or top? interesting prospective ms

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