Open Poetry #46 |
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Perfect for me... |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
I sat down and took out time today, To reflect on my life, my past days. Many events had a déjà vu feeling, Yeah, many things had been repeating. I wondered why, life everyday, Had turned out, to be this way. Life had been simple yet confusing, Sometimes straight yet twisting, It had been dull yet so bright, And been noisy yet so quiet… When I said right, life took me left. It made me busy, when I wanted rest. When I thought “Yeah, that’s the rite door, my destiny,” Life seemed to have something else in store for me. But then, something I realized; Although the tune was different, The song somehow seemed right. And even if I’d be given 3 wishes, To make life unlike now it is; I would never ever change it, because it’s better than I’d aimed it. It isn’t so flawless, sometimes a total mess, but it’s perfect for me… Yeah, I love the way my life, awry yet right, has turned out to be… ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile... :D |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Prats...enjoyed your use of a non-whine approach and appreciation for how your life is..cool tude' keep it up. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
It takes an awareness of self to understand that what we are is exactly what we are supposed to be. I liked this. To mimic is a form of praise unless |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
My life so far has been pretty much like yours and yes we do come to the point of knowing that we are exactly where we're supposed to be. I still find, however, that I rebel a bit but it doesn't get me anywhere. Enjoyed the read! Helen |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Bravo, bravo, bravo! You know, Brats, I got a great feeling from a good message in this piece and I really like it. Thanks! ![]() ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yeah, I love the way my life, awry yet right, has turned out to be… ... me too! ![]() |
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Prats Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74 |
I thank you everyone for your comments... I do believe that life is wonderful... For me, a day is not just a day... It's a million little moments waiting to surprise me... ![]() When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile... :D |
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