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Karleygirl
Junior Member
since 2010-08-05
Posts 20


0 posted 2010-12-24 02:12 AM



Someday you'll cry for me,
Like I cried for you...
Someday You'll miss me,
Like I missed you...
Someday you'll nedd me,
Like i needed you....
Someday you'll love me,
But i'll be over you..

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2010-12-24 03:09 AM


Hi Karley
Welcome to Passions. You'll enjoy your time here.

Now your poem...
Good for you, I wouldn't waste my life away for someone who doesn't appreciate me.
Like you write, you'll be over it.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

JerryPat
Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
2 posted 2010-12-24 07:12 AM


Ah . . . Makes me think of the Julie London song, "Cry Me a River." Nice work.

. . . and the raven said, )(%!~@~#&$ . . .

Prats
Member
since 2010-12-16
Posts 74

3 posted 2010-12-24 08:42 AM


really true... if s/he doesn't care for me, i wouldn't give a damn to them...

When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile... :D

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2010-12-24 10:42 PM


Nice...James
latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
5 posted 2010-12-25 01:33 AM


Karleygirl,HA,Loved your  poem. My mind also jumped to Cry me a River. Tells somethig about our ages. LOL latearrival
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