Open Poetry #46 |
Anticipating Martie - Merry Christmas, Sissie |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Anticipating Martie she grows us green and like tender buds of spring keeping up the good search she allows us to grow encouragement and watering showing and showering having a whistle type of day so delicious the scents she cultivates… in pausing to think sometimes she is Eliza Doolittle to me for I hear of flowers and flower keepers I've seen us both hold the key knowing she is a giver of flowers then Martie comes to mind with a bit of an accent but oh so much wiser even when running on empty and she paints a moment like no one I know… O… her poetry holds court the good poets that are here all revere our Martie gently knocking, knocking on blue she keeps us rocking, rocking anew gently kicks us forward, takes us to our knees all I ask for, Martie, are some more words, please… string them, sing them make them rhyme show me distant feel the time walk with us and talk with us on a ride with such a view I haven’t all the words yet but some words do come to mind if I were to compare us I’d find me on the other side of her mirror knocking to get out… if I compare us…I don’t for we’re deeper than you think we’re a chance meeting for you to see the signs we’re a harmony unknown in the words we sing we’re a chance meeting for the gifts we bring but to always breathe her words walk her mind be the song in her throat oh, she grows me green but jealousy has no place here no…she grows me green as a bud watering me allowing me to grow and shine so I am watchful and waitful and grateful in anticipating Martie… 01.17.01 |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
You have a way with words as well as poetry. It's absolutely...beautiful. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
If this is the Martie I know, and I am pretty sure it is, I absolutely agree with every word of this tribute. When I first came here and read her for the first time I was wowed! to say the least. Her juxtaposition of words are so unique and wonderful each line is something to marvel at and shake your head at its complete knowledge of the human heart. I have read many poets, would-be poets and world-class poets and I have never read any with more pureness of thought as does Martie, and I am grateful I have lived long enough to make her acquaintance and read her words. http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
sunshine this is an awesome tribute , a gift of poetry and a christmas present that will enlight many hearts... have a merry christmas yann |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Nicely done for a dear friend. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thanks Sissie for bringing this one back at such a special time. It makes my heart happy and I enjoy the replies as well. xoxoxo |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There is no doubt that we all revere Martie and her beautiful thoughts put to poetry. Guess what? We think awfully highly of you, too, Sunshine |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful delicate write for dear Martie... Missing everyone here and wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas. Heart Hugs~Nancy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah yes, dear Martie, what a special little gentle flower she is. Her words are the very essence of eloquence when describing love, friendship, sorrow, passion, reality, nature's beauty (she's a marvel at this one), family, children, relationships and especially compassion. The world is a much better place with her in it. Excellent Karilea!! Eric ain't doin nothin al all just answerin the call |
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