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Open Poetry #46

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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-12-21 09:25 AM

theres a lining here
between the blue and white hues
a sparkling silver

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2010-12-21 09:50 AM

Do you have your head in the clouds this morning? Liked this

ho ho ho
Lori

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2010-12-21 11:04 AM

Perhaps

Happy Holidays Lori!

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2010-12-21 12:00 PM

I don't think your head is in the clouds, Trina, I think they are just in the right place. Nice work.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2010-12-26 09:47 PM

Nice...James

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2010-12-26 11:11 PM

..very nice haiku; yea..

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2010-12-26 11:54 PM

The old cliche, "every cloud has a silver lining."

Nicely done Trina.
Write on!!

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

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