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Open Poetry #46
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gdcod3player
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0 posted 2010-12-18 12:45 PM


Come into my arms and look into the sky
Your my only road
The one that keeps me driving in a strait path
But when you left i went out of control
Everything i thought i had didnt last

Let me sing you to sleep at night
Let your love carry me
To a place that we can only share

I need a ride out of my dreams
Keep me coming back
Those three years were my only thing to look back on
I wish you knew how much i loved you
The coolness that touches me at night
I have no one to warm me up
Cause your gone
Gone Gone Gone

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since 2010-12-16
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1 posted 2010-12-18 08:51 AM


this poem is luvly n really touching... i really like it...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

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