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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

0 posted 2010-12-15 06:54 PM

first time she came around
you know . . .
personalizing herself to the world
and me
you shoulda been there, friend
hair on my arms erect
chilled me
did it ever chill me . . .

took one glancing glance
eyes, deep jungle glow
lost myself evermore
sucked my breath away
only breathed again
because she blinked
old masters-like work of art
taking the best
for herself . . .

stroking ivory-white skin
without touching
eyes touched, eyes caressed
everything
feeling bliss, overpowering
wanted to cry aloud
oh, she looked back at me
nodded royally . . .

a haughty look
maybe
no matter
it . . . did . . . not . . . matter
lips separated
for my tongue?
yes
slid between them . . .

fantasying, I groan
thrilling imagination
still
she . . . did . . . look . . . back
awed? wet-red-tongue licked shiny lipstick
a spiritual moment
oh, my yes
finally believing castles in the sky

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Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

1 posted 2010-12-15 07:04 PM

A sensual journey that captivates the reader.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2010-12-15 07:06 PM

Hi Earl. Thank you for stopping by and commenting.

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Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

3 posted 2010-12-15 08:31 PM

"only breathed again
because she blinked"

Yes in deed, they'll do that to you. Thanks for sharing words and image.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

4 posted 2010-12-15 08:40 PM

You know that feeling also, huh Andrew? Thanks.

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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2010-12-16 03:13 AM

Good thing she blinked because I really enjoy reading your poetic musings.

You could probably only get two or three lines out while not breathing!!....(smile)

Great images of sensuality Jerry.
You really must have been there, I know I have been before. That's why I can relate and appreciate.

Eric

This band's won two grammys for instrumentals. You don't know how that makes me feel as the lead singer!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-12-16 06:46 AM

enjoyed being the voyeur here JP

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

7 posted 2010-12-16 07:59 AM

Hi Eric. You betcha I have been there. Thanks for your input and banter. It is appreciated.

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The drapes are always pulled back a dab for the voyeurs out there, DS.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2010-12-17 01:38 PM

Pretty hot stuff ya got goin' there guy. wow! Lori

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

9 posted 2010-12-17 02:21 PM

Thank you, Lori. Appreciate the comments.

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mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

10 posted 2010-12-17 08:10 PM

wonderful poem.very nicely done.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

11 posted 2010-12-17 08:13 PM

Hi Mike, and thank you for reading my poem and commenting.

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